“Annoying parents”
(Mifrah’s group)-
Saniya’s first one was long and effective and she made a good use of people to match their actions to her speech. Although, she did speak too fast which didn't let the audience soak in the previous "rules".
The Chinese accent one was funny, however if the accent was carried on from both of the parents, then it would have been funnier- also the remarks could be slightly exaggerated.
I feel that the entire group needs to work on voice projection, Hamza and Vanessa did well with this however the other members need to be louder.
I think all of their pieces used nice staging, they had the speaker placed in an appropriate spot with the actors in the background, without being completely neglected.
Transitions? There weren't any clear ones.
The opening and closing was not so clear, was there an opening scene?
During vanessa’s part, why is Hamza standing in the back?
Has no effect, he probably doesn't need to be there, or if he is then perhaps some action would justify his presence.
“Awkward moments’
(Ayat’s group)-
This group had a clear opening scene with Mezba entering, and introducing it comically, although I think he could be a little more casual rather than the formal opening because then it doesn't look as cool.
The first scene (not quite sure who's) was rather too short. I didn't quite understand the reason or story behind the piece.
Everyone in the group needs to work on voice projection- only Ayat seemed to be moderately loud, everyone else I could barely hear.
Most of their voices were quite monotoned and flat- add some excitement, or awkwardness, or something to spice it up and make it look less dead.
Scripts in hand…
Ayat has good expressions and voice projections- her
exaggeration makes it funny
Transitions?
Clear ending?
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